THE J5-Written by D.Nesmith

Here's another scene from The J5,I wrote this as a commercial vechicle for African American film.If there is any interest particularly from FOX Searchlight, please comment below. I'm looking for feedback, ENJOY:

Suddenly, Hazel walks in.

With her beautiful comb natural and plunging neckline, she scans the room looking for Jermaine. Staffers greet her as she walks by, Hazel finally spots him at the table.

Switching in her tiny dress, Hazel sits at the table with the brothers.The boys all look at her, Hazel plants her self next to Jermaine in between Marlon.

HAZEL GORDY

(batting her eyes)

Hi Jermaine.

JERMAINE JACKSON

(smiling)

Hi Hazel.

Marlon and Michael laugh, Jermaine glares at his brothers.

HAZEL GORDY

(looking at Jermaine)

Can I talk to you?

JERMAINE JACKSON

Sure.

Jermaine puts down his plate. Hazel grabs his hand and leads the way,Motown staffers watch the young couple while Berry mingles in the corner.

HALLWAY

Hazel and Jermaine stand in the hallway, only a few inches between them. Hazel stares into Jermaine's eyes, walking towards him, he wraps his arms around her waist.

Hazel's curves fill his arms, resting her head on his shoulder. Her big eyes stare back at him as Jermaine rubs her nose.

HAZEL GORDY

(sweetly)

You know how I feel about you?

JERMAINE JACKSON

(sweetly)

I know.

HAZEL GORDY

I saw those girls...in Chicago...I wanna be with you Jermaine... and only you.

JERMAINE JACKSON

I dunno Hazel....I'm not ready yet....marriage is for those who truly understand it...

Jermaine shakes his head, Hazel knows how he feels. Standing on her tip toes, she kisses Jermaine sweetly while people walk past.

JERMAINE JACKSON

(shy;shaking his head)

Hazel, not here.

HAZEL GORDY

(sweetly)

I understand ... call me ... later ...I'll be up....I won't go to sleep without hearing your voice...

JERMAINE JACKSON

(pointing;stuttering)

I gotta go...back in....bye Hazel...

HAZEL GORDY

Bye Jermaine.

Hazel's hips sway, Jermaine watches her walk away. His chest sighs at the walk of a beautiful young woman like Hazel, as she disappears in the distance he goes back inside.